In any case I was telling Ricky about River Road he got onto the blog and i showed him the river road pics. He then asked me what the story was about the circle. I told him how there was the circle in the water and then the one through the clouds with jeff. he thought that was really amazing.
then later on i was looking at one of the cards we made for kacies memorial service. it has the poem "Love" typed on the back.
I found it really interesting... and thought of the poem a little bit differently.
Love, perhaps more science than romance.
Invisible yet quantifiable matter > the clouds jeff saw
it might evaporate and float away > the clouds again and/or the water in the river
fall elsewhere,
freeze, boil; > the river was frozen around the circle that day at river rd
it could circulate in the blood,
bitter as an infection,
benevolent as a nutrient.
Clear, tangible.
It died. It was born.
2 comments:
i liked your analysis of her poem.
your idea was very original.
she was such a good writer.
i also remember kacie telling me about your brother and what a good times you guys had together.
Natalie, this is very interesting. It is just like what I just realized with the poem Nancy posted a while back. It's amazing how natural views can make you think about the things you love.
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